Tuesday, January 28, 2014

Jared- I like to see more of this later on and it was funny. good job but use other instrument instead of the same one.

Fiona- make your narration a little lower cause if you make it loud like how it was u cant hear the instrument as much and like if u listen it to your self i think you'll see the problem. I like the guitar part tho but the electric guitar wont go with your genre.

Art- Its sounds really creepy in the beginning....I like it. Love the guitar part its cool. I want the narration to be a little more scenes to me but i like it how u used this narration.

Abraham- I like the chowder part.....its hilarious but can you make the effects under chowder lower. love the dj part.

Jessie- It was awesome i wish to hear more if your work.

Frankie- I like it so far. Also like the electric guitar part it goes along with your narration.

Jennifer- I like it actually its sounds like someone else who didn't made the song just took the song and changed it for himself.

Brian Tu- It was cool

Brandon- you could make the notes go together more often n fade some parts in but i like it.

Eric- sounds like im in a fighting game with R2D2 as my partner.

Destiny- like the instrumental part and the narration.

Michel Noa- i like the narration and like how u replayed some parts of it.

Sara- Like the bass and the bass drop section. sounds like someones talking to me from a video about life.

Carlos- your narration is like a cormmercial from nature itself

Ruby- wish u could make the effects stay on track and not bounce around. i would also wish that u would add a few more narration.

steve o- I like your beginning of Eminem and I also like your second narration.

Michael Tam- i like your narration and your instrumental choice it goes great with your narrative and i feel like he's talking to us.

Zhi- i like the narration you use and the loops you use for it to make it go with the narration.

Silver- your narration and your loops goes great together and i like it so far. I feel like he's talking to me like I'm in the army and that he called a meeting for everyone to talk to us.

Emily- i like the narration and i feel like a fancy person at a fancy party listening to Martin luther king jr. talking about slavery and while listening to the band playing some music. some of the loops doesn't go well with the narration but it was a job well done.

Dominic- i would like to hear more of the narration. pretty good choice of the instruments and narration of morgan freeman quotes.

Raymond- I think that you should make your instruments a little louder because i cant hear as much of your work and the u should make the instruments match a little and i would like to hear something else than the repeats.






































































































































































































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